Kia Ora Phoebe. I like your blog post about athletics day. Did you like athletics day? I like how you explained what all the activities are. Good job Phoebe. Maybe next time you could add a part at the top were you will explain your blog post is about and you could add your next step? I like it good job.
Kia Ora Phoebe it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your athletics post.
My favourite activity was discus and shot put.
What were your favourite activitys?
Kia Ora Phoebe.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about athletics day. Did you like athletics day? I like how you explained what all the activities are. Good job Phoebe.
Maybe next time you could add a part at the top were you will explain your blog post is about and you could add your next step? I like it good job.
Blog you later.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Phoebe
ReplyDeleteI love the amount of information you have put in your post. Where did you get your information from?